很窘迫,以前没有参加过雅思,不知道写作处于一个什么水平,求助大家帮忙看看这样写task1能拿到多少分,帮我改改语法错误也好,谢谢,感激不尽~
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. X, y" B3 y) ^# h+ bThe graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries , countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
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2 o0 s3 B- k8 U+ q; X+ i! gThe graph illustrates how the percentage of average anual gross domestic product change in the period from 1960s to 1990s in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globisers.* s: |( C x# ^# z5 y
As can be seen from the bar chart, the percengtage of GDP fell dramaticly from 4.8% to 2.8% until 1970s in rich coutries. It kept decrease tendency to 2% in a decade from 1970s to 1990s in same kinds of countries.
$ P' q; E4 g2 }$ u2 gOnthe contray, the percentage of globerlies GDP grow to 3.2% from 1.2% duir the period from 1960s to 1980s. The speed of GDP growth acclerated and climbed to 4.9% in 1990s.
7 u; l% Z7 a3 w0 k _" z) hTurning to non -globalisers whose GDPgrowthe fluctuated during four decade from 1960s to 1990s. The average annual GDP of non-globalises witness a gradually increase to 3.2% and 1.3% from 1960s to 1970s and from 1980s to 1990s respectively. However, it also showed a sharply decline to 0.8% from 3.2% over a period between 1970s and 1980s. |