标题: 求高人帮我看看我的task 1 能到几分 [打印本页] 作者: rosexwliu 时间: 2012-5-3 22:35 标题: 求高人帮我看看我的task 1 能到几分 很窘迫,以前没有参加过雅思,不知道写作处于一个什么水平,求助大家帮忙看看这样写task1能拿到多少分,帮我改改语法错误也好,谢谢,感激不尽~ " u0 B+ d: y% }0 \题目: 7 ~, \8 w2 g, G% K" m' l: r1 gThe graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries , countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.# J9 c$ E3 S9 f4 U& s7 }
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The graph illustrates how the percentage of average anual gross domestic product change in the period from 1960s to 1990s in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globisers.( i2 P/ H. ?3 [2 U1 u
As can be seen from the bar chart, the percengtage of GDP fell dramaticly from 4.8% to 2.8% until 1970s in rich coutries. It kept decrease tendency to 2% in a decade from 1970s to 1990s in same kinds of countries.0 S [; J( ]9 F( A6 }& K
Onthe contray, the percentage of globerlies GDP grow to 3.2% from 1.2% duir the period from 1960s to 1980s. The speed of GDP growth acclerated and climbed to 4.9% in 1990s. + o! O2 J2 g$ W1 Q# UTurning to non -globalisers whose GDPgrowthe fluctuated during four decade from 1960s to 1990s. The average annual GDP of non-globalises witness a gradually increase to 3.2% and 1.3% from 1960s to 1970s and from 1980s to 1990s respectively. However, it also showed a sharply decline to 0.8% from 3.2% over a period between 1970s and 1980s.作者: IELTS哥 时间: 2012-5-3 22:35
差不多能通过的样子;具体作文得分看大作文表现作者: rosexwliu 时间: 2012-5-4 19:41