标题: 【雅思小作文修改检查表】 [打印本页] 作者: IELTS哥 时间: 2012-5-22 07:34 标题: 【雅思小作文修改检查表】 对于自己复习的烤鸭，最难得莫过于写了作文不知道对不对。。没人帮忙修改，也看不出自己哪里犯了错，哪里需要改进~下面是一名外籍雅思老师为烤鸭们总结的checklist，照着这个，你可以对自己练习写的小作文进行修改，learn from your own mistake是最好的提高方法！
A checklist for part 1 graphs, charts and tables
In task 1 it is important that you accurately describe the information from the diagram so you don’t lose marks under Task Response. The difficulty is to decide what is the key information as there is often a lot of data to process. One way of thinking about this, is to ask yourself if someone could draw the chart and graph from the information in your report. This is not easy to do and so to help you, you will find below a 8 point checklist, an exercise and a practice suggestion.
Checklist
Here is my 8 point checklist to help you include the relevant details. I suggest you use it to check your own work: you should be able to answer “yes”to all the questions.
1. Type of diagram 图表类型
Have you correctly identified whether it is a bar chart/line graph/pie chart/flow chart/table?
有没有说清楚这个一个什么样的图表----柱状图？线图？饼图？还是流程图？
2. The correct tense 时态
Have you correctly identified whether the data in the chart relates to past time, a current state of affairs or a future prediction? This includes not just using the correct tenses but also including specific times in your report.
有没有运用正确的时态呢？要记住，不止要用对时态，还要再小作文中写清具体的时间！
3. The subjects 对象
Have you included all the subjects that are referred to in the diagram? Even if you have a bar chart ortable naming 8 different countries for example, you still need to refer to them all in your report.
所有图表中所提到的对象都写进小作文了吗？如果图表里提到8个国家，全部都要写进去哦~
4. Units
Have you included references to the units? These may be units of time (months/years etc), money (millions of £) or simple numbers (10,000s). To do this, you need to read the x and y axes carefully.
单位写清楚了吗？X轴和Y轴上的单位都要看清楚哦~
5. Highs and lows/Beginnings and ends/Biggest and smallest
Have you included the extremes shown in the diagram? In nearly all charts and graphs these are key features to include as they give the reader a frame for understanding the chart or graph. When there is a lot of data, you may not include every extreme so you need to use your judgement.
文中有重要信息点了吗？最高点、最低点、起点、终点、最多的、最少的一定要写进去！
6. Patterns and trends 模式和趋势
Have you noted any patterns?
In dynamic charts (when there is a change in time), it is nearly always important to note whether the general trend is upwards or downwards.
在一个有变化的图表里，整体趋势如何，上升？下降？要写清~
In static charts (when there is only one time frame), it can be important to note patterns. For example, if you look at my sample report on holiday destinations, you will see that I group England, Scotland and Wales together and note that they have a similar pattern.
7. Exceptions
Is there anything in the chart that is completely different to the general pattern? If so, this too is very likely to be a key detail that needs to be noted.
除了常规方式外的东西也要写到，就是图表中的“例外”。
8. Ordering information排序
Have you ordered the information in a logical way? It is no good putting all the right information in if the keys points are hidden away. This can happen if you follow the order of the chart without thinking. Possible logical ways of ordering the report include:
从图表中选择的信息，又按照合理的逻辑排列好顺序吗？常见的逻辑顺序有：
start with the most significant detail 从最重要的细节开始说起
start with the general pattern, then note exceptions 从一般模式说起，然后注明有例外
group items that are similar 写一组里面有相似性的东西
move from the largest to the smallest 从最大值写到最小值
move from the first in time to the last in time 从时间起点写到时间终点
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第一次考雅思，不知哪位大神能给点建议？作者: zoey 时间: 2014-6-24 02:48
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:
题目：
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
范文介绍：
This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.
MODEL ANSWER （范文）
The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.
Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.
However, some people believe that innatetalent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.
I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versusnurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.
In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.
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Thank you. (1) Bar chart, pie chart, line graph, flow table. (2) Be careful with the past time, current state of affairs, and future prediction. And include specific times. (3) Includes all subjects in the essay. (4) Read the x and y axes carefully for correct units. (5) Describe the beginning point, ending point, the highest point, the lowest point, the largest amount, and the smallest amount. (6) Notice the upward and downward trends in dynamic charts. (7) Include any exception. (8) Ordering the report in a logical way such as time, amount, similarity, general to exception, and the most important details.作者: joswang 时间: 2015-6-29 17:27
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