很窘迫,以前没有参加过雅思,不知道写作处于一个什么水平,求助大家帮忙看看这样写task1能拿到多少分,帮我改改语法错误也好,谢谢,感激不尽~
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The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries , countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.* N% t9 {# V/ }+ u$ A( B
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The graph illustrates how the percentage of average anual gross domestic product change in the period from 1960s to 1990s in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globisers.
) E/ u) \& ?! z* W; k9 D8 V w& kAs can be seen from the bar chart, the percengtage of GDP fell dramaticly from 4.8% to 2.8% until 1970s in rich coutries. It kept decrease tendency to 2% in a decade from 1970s to 1990s in same kinds of countries.
^: c! b7 v2 jOnthe contray, the percentage of globerlies GDP grow to 3.2% from 1.2% duir the period from 1960s to 1980s. The speed of GDP growth acclerated and climbed to 4.9% in 1990s.) S, Z! j7 G ^0 u7 W
Turning to non -globalisers whose GDPgrowthe fluctuated during four decade from 1960s to 1990s. The average annual GDP of non-globalises witness a gradually increase to 3.2% and 1.3% from 1960s to 1970s and from 1980s to 1990s respectively. However, it also showed a sharply decline to 0.8% from 3.2% over a period between 1970s and 1980s. |