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作者: IELTS哥    时间: 2012-4-22 05:44
标题: 【2012年4月21日雅思大作文范文】
原题:Some people prefer planning for the future while others argue that we should focus on the present.  What is your opinion?  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

IELTS Essay: Future or Present?
Created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh
中国考区2012年4月21日雅思大作文
海外大学教师谢振礼原创

真题大意:有人认为应该计划将来,也有人认为重点就是现在。你同意哪一种想法?
请说出你的道理,并却从个人的知识或经验中,举出例子来证明。



Example Writing:

The present is where everything begins and there is no time like the present. Without being prisoners of the past, winners prefer working in the changing present toward the unpredictable future.  The trouble with some people is that they are planning only for the unforeseeable time to come and not facing the reality now.

Paradoxically, the future is now. It is more realistic to regard life as an awareness of the present rather than a prediction beyond knowledge.  Since the future is anybody's guess, "one today is worth two tomorrows,"  to quote Benjamin Franklin.  Therefore, the way we live and the way we work ought to keep in step with the present leading to the future.  The logic may be that we can only learn from the past, and on the other hand the future does not affect us now as much as does the present.  It also makes sense that the way to plan tomorrow is to enjoy living and working as wisely and beautifully today as possible.

Our argument for focusing on today may as well be based on the fact that the present does not sit still for a portrait, but is changing constantly.  Change being the law of life, concentrating our mind on what is happening in the present is probably more true to life than dreaming of the future.  It means that life for us today is always becoming and never being.  Obviously, today has its own problems to be solved, so there is no need to be over troubled about the future. Accordingly, it is better not to foresee the future but be concerned about taking care of the present.  It is one thing to prefer planning for the future, but it is quite another to control the change that follows soon enough.

Focusing on the present is more important than merely planning for the future because right now is one of the moments we are influencing our future.  Practically, we should see the future in the present which carries more weight in real life.  It stands to reason that the future actually begins now.






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雅思哥,28小作文会有流程图吗?

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作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-22 09:27
题目还原得不准确。是some people think that it is a waste of time for individuals to plan for the future,so it is more important for us to focus on  the present.

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作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-22 09:27
请问雅思哥,有12号的范文吗?

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作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-22 13:05
我们只能把握现在,活在当下。但对未来有规划有幻想,又有何不可。不然人为什么要有梦想,有了梦想才会朝那个方向奔去,人不可能没有幻想那是不上进

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作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-22 14:35
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作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-22 16:06
回复@Hiii-Moon:没写哎

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作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-22 17:52
我的大作文没时间写我的reason写的好少阿,还有一百多个单词没写,你觉得有几分阿

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作者: 蜂鸟    时间: 2012-4-23 10:22
   freshman,but i'll try my best
作者: 微博评论    时间: 2012-4-23 12:44
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来自 taylor在唱歌 的新浪微博
作者: 2295652278    时间: 2012-5-4 22:30
要是我考的时候遇到这种题直接就吐血了吧。看范文嘚啵嘚啵的也没说啥,也凑了不少字,哎
作者: 痞杨    时间: 2012-5-11 11:37
我也考了21r的雅思,写作5.5找到差距了
作者: MooreYuan    时间: 2012-5-11 12:32
本帖最后由 MooreYuan 于 2012-5-11 12:35 编辑

Think about the future in a rough way, formulte the present  with a detained plan.
In my eyes, the IELTS 'some people' appears a boring usage of astonishing stupidity.
作者: bayer1234    时间: 2012-10-4 10:09
   freshman,but i'll try my best

作者: Jessica_lM0    时间: 2012-12-31 21:07
谢谢分享~
作者: okokokfai    时间: 2015-8-14 22:57
I need coin
作者: 田辉辉    时间: 2016-8-7 12:14
好担心,我的英语比较差





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