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艾肯法莱 发表于 2012-12-22 08:54:04 | 只看该作者
非常好。先顶再看。
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gsfskyman 发表于 2013-1-18 19:11:12 | 只看该作者
第一次考雅思,不知哪位大神能给点建议?
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zoey 发表于 2014-6-24 02:48:26 | 只看该作者
xiexie~~!!
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dzxhshs 发表于 2014-9-22 00:33:57 | 只看该作者
很受用 学习中。。。。
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littleeagle 发表于 2014-11-22 18:10:06 | 只看该作者
This helps a lot
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caouoe 发表于 2014-11-26 01:06:21 | 只看该作者
感谢分享
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背后的故事 发表于 2015-3-3 17:56:52 | 只看该作者
WRITING TASK 2
  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
  Write about the following topic:
  题目:
  It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
  You should write at least 250 words.
  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
  范文介绍:
  This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.
  MODEL ANSWER (范文)
  The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.
  Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.
  However, some people believe that innatetalent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.
  I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versusnurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.
  In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.
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ChristinaLi 发表于 2015-6-29 17:16:05 | 只看该作者
Thank you. (1) Bar chart, pie chart, line graph, flow table. (2) Be careful with the past time, current state of affairs, and future prediction. And include specific times. (3) Includes all subjects in the essay. (4) Read the x and y axes carefully for correct units. (5) Describe the beginning point, ending point, the highest point, the lowest point, the largest amount, and the smallest amount. (6) Notice the upward and downward trends in dynamic charts. (7) Include any exception. (8) Ordering the report in a logical way such as time, amount, similarity, general to exception, and the most important details.
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