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little_God 发表于 2012-4-13 21:56:48 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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题目:Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which your consider to be the most effective.(comics,books,radio,television,film,theater)' _- k2 T) ^* B+ w1 ]$ t8 ?

; M+ d8 C' q0 a, D. w  ~正文:In the contemporary world,with the development of technology at a staggering rate,it is obvious that reading books,watching TV and seeing movies can increase our knowledge and expand our outlooks. By obtaining the information from television,books and films,people can know about the thoughts from the government and acquire more new technology. This fact has aroused some controversy. As follows, I will express some views about this matter.
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Apparently, TV, books and films three of the most essential parts of our life. It always influence our lifestyle and are beneficial to us, especially, entertaining, relaxing and even studying. The first point with respect to this is that many successful celebrities publish their autobiography about their own experiences of success, which can be learnt to understand variety of important things, such as what kind of things you should do, why you ought to do it and how you should do it. By imitating them, we do not need to go unnecessary routes. In second place, it is very evidently significant that the criminal news can be reported by media on TV. For instance, through the Internet, an increasing number of liars use many different ways to talk to you on the QQ and get your privacy in order that they can easily take in your money. Meanwhile, the TV will cover these. Finally, the films can quickly show us different cultures and the latest technique in our world, which can expand our outlooks and acquire more knowledge.( L" b  _1 A" {' `+ {. T
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Admittedly, books, films and TV have some disadvantages for individuals too. The reason why children can easily go astray is that books and television also involve some violence and pornography. Besides, films in which there are too many scenes can rapidly impact the youngerter deeply.
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, k( j& E  y" M- N- PSpeaking for myself, books, tv, and films are beneficial to individuals. The advantages overweigh disadvantage. Not only can people be helped to understand this society, but also people know new things they do not know. Meanwhile we should encourage the government to useful measures to prevent TV, films and books spreading disgusting things so that we will have a bright world in the future.
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IELTS哥 发表于 2012-4-15 08:37:47 | 只看该作者
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